SuzukiSavage.com - Opinions needed

LostArtist Ex Member	Re: Opinions needed Reply #15 - 10/05/11 at 13:27:20 okay, last two choices clean or decorated
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Z Full Member Offline Ride Baby Ride!!! Posts: 144 Northwestern PA Gender:	Re: Opinions needed Reply #16 - 10/05/11 at 14:42:25 Clean except I like the yellow sunburst in the background of the dirty one. I just don't care for the paint splotches.
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Red_Wine Senior Member Offline Chain-drive, 400cc Black Savage in Chile Posts: 478 Santiago, Chile Gender:	Re: Opinions needed Reply #17 - 10/06/11 at 06:30:25 Clean design looks good... can you get a Savage as the bike depicted? Ride Safe, RW
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babyhog Serious Thumper Offline On two wheels... again Posts: 3805 WV Gender:	Re: Opinions needed Reply #18 - 10/06/11 at 07:22:46 Yep, agree with Z. Like the background sunburst. Neat to see the progression too. Love it. (splotches would be more fitting for a dirt bike!)
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LostArtist Ex Member	Re: Opinions needed Reply #19 - 10/06/11 at 09:01:30 okay, I went a little crazy and here it is. sorry clean messy if someone can send me a good profile (from the side) shot of a savage I'll do one with it as the bike. and also make it more like the clean one or however you all want it.
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Starlifter Serious Thumper Offline It only snows seven months of the year here. Posts: 3746 Eastern Michigan Gender:	Re: Opinions needed Reply #20 - 10/06/11 at 09:40:10 Make the owl face an eagle or better yet a logo...maybe the bird wings could be the S40 Boulevard wings with the savage logo in the round spot.
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weracerc Serious Thumper Offline SuzukiSavage.com Rocks! Posts: 594 Greensboro, NC Gender:	Re: Opinions needed Reply #21 - 10/06/11 at 09:55:18 i like the top one just above - with the exception of the bird eyes - the nose is cool and everything else is cool - the bird eyes just dont do it for me.......would love it if the eyes were evil'ish
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Re: Opinions needed
Reply #22 - 10/06/11 at 10:16:23

does this help??

NO OWL!

NO LOGOS - legal reasons- most companies won't care but why risk it.

NO EAGLE - buy a harley

yes this is the mess one, if you don't like it clean it up in your own mind. Tongue

I'll clean it up and repost later. like later tonight

the eyes aren't evilish for a reason, there's nothing evil about death/skulls, sick of seeing every skull have evil eyes. . .

sorry, not trying to be too confrontational but I'm in a hurry so, sorry

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babyhog Serious Thumper Offline On two wheels... again Posts: 3805 WV Gender:	Re: Opinions needed Reply #23 - 10/06/11 at 10:24:36 Nope, the messy one distorts the bike too much. Not identifiable any more. I do like the messy look on the word "Ride" though. The clean pic in Reply #15 is still my favorite.
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Starlifter Serious Thumper Offline It only snows seven months of the year here. Posts: 3746 Eastern Michigan Gender:	Re: Opinions needed Reply #24 - 10/06/11 at 10:26:05 You simply must change that goofy owl face. Put anything but that in the circle. Even this would be better.
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LostArtist Ex Member	Re: Opinions needed Reply #25 - 10/06/11 at 10:26:43 fyi, I hate the teeth . . .
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Reply #26 - 10/06/11 at 10:36:57

well I"m not going to be able to please you all so . . .

is there any concensus among anyone here????

pick from what's been shown, no more revisions until you all can agree on ONE thing for me to go towards. for class I'm submitting the messy one without the teeth.

Star, I"m not changing the middle much, so if that drives you away, sorry, the abstract skull/death works for me, I'm not beating you over the head with OOOO look at the skull it's so mean, I must be so tough cause I'm wearing it . . . blah blah BS. I really didn't want to explain that either.

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babyhog Serious Thumper Offline On two wheels... again Posts: 3805 WV Gender:	Re: Opinions needed Reply #27 - 10/06/11 at 10:48:45 I think the motorcycle is too distorted in the messy one. Blends in, almost un-noticeable.
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Re: Opinions needed
Reply #28 - 10/06/11 at 10:58:10

No good art was ever created by committee..

But I think the general consensus is:

-Clean is better than the paintball splotches
-Cleaned up silhouette better than the detailed one
-Later revised skull better than the one w/diamond nose
-Sunburst better than rainbow

I like the later one with the feathery bird. The only thing that rubs me wrong on that one is the curves of "Ride" conflict with some of the bike lines.

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Reply #29 - 10/06/11 at 11:10:39

okay, here it is:

Bike is bigger! splatters smaller.

I like how the Ride is, the R is on the seat and the upstoke of the d is the frame to the tripple tree and the e goes into the wheel, happy accident!! I like this, I would wear this, I have to wear this for class actually but I like this! Cool

if you all like this, send me a photo of a savage profile, or I can get one online I guess and I'll make one like this with a savage. so how do we vote on here so I know if you all want that????

and again, thank you all!!

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